Comment on Chapter 4, page 22 by The Doodler.

I /guess/ Arthur /maybe/ could survive? I’m not betting on it, though. He’s already bled like, what, a liter in a couple
seconds? That looks pretty dead to me.
And Martha was pretty clearly shot in the heart. :/

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Chapter 4, page 22
I keep thinking of the last line of the Silmarilion here: “and if it has passed from the high and the beautiful to darkness and ruin, that was of old the fate of Arda Marred; and If any change shall come and the Marring be amended, Manwë and Varda may know; but they have not revealed it, and it is not declared in the dooms of Mandos.”


Recent Comments by The Doodler

Chapter 4, page 27
Welp, my entire skin just crawled off, brb gotta go catch it.


Chapter 4, page 26
I’m thinking she’ll find out what he did sooner or later…


Chapter 4, page 25
The lawyer’s sucessor, right there.
(And isn’t Justice usually shown as blindfolded…?)


Chapter 4, page 25
Local Horribly Messed-Up Middle-Schooler Smarter Than Literally Everyone Else, details at eleven. I’m glad he has Martha as a witness that he accused Orestes, though. I don’t put it past him to do something stupid and self-destructive like killing Fotis to try and hide.


Chapter 4, page 24
Commander Regrettable Undershave is waaay too overconfident. Also, who the heck is Iris really working for? Herself? The aliens poised to invade while the humans are distracted?